New lines! and Sound!

I decided that the lines were too thick and generally messy. Therefore I spent 2 days reinking the entire thing and colouring it again. I used thinner lines this time and i personally think that it look a whole lot neater than before. Here are some screens to show the comparison between old and new:

  

Also, I am happy to reveal that someone from the Audio Production course has contacted me and volunteered to help put some music to this sting! I am very excited about this, so hopefully the finished sting will have sound. I was sent a trial music clip and thought it was perfect, so this should be awesome!